The listing paragraph is the thing to remove. Historiography should appear where it does work, which means inside the argument rather than before it.
Instead of opening with a survey of who said what, bring a historian in at the point where you disagree with them, or where their reading is the obvious alternative to yours. One sentence establishing the position, then your response to it.
That way each mention earns its place, and the essay reads as a contribution to a conversation rather than a summary of one followed by an unrelated answer.
As a rough gauge, an undergraduate essay usually needs two or three historians doing real work, not ten being catalogued.